The grade 9 class has touched on proper essay formatting before, but never like this! Yes, they know the usual 5 body paragraph essay with the oh-so typical introduction, body, and conclusion format, but what they didn't know was how important that introduction paragraph is! This week the 9s were learning all about writing effective hooks, how to capture the reader's attention, how to incorporate general and specific information, and last but definitely not least, they were working on how to write the perfect list thesis.
We reviewed what a hook was (from rhetorical questions, to relevant quotations, to even starting statements), and how to funnel down from general information to specific information, and what a list thesis really was. "A thesis? What's a thesis?!", they cried! Oh, it was music to my ears. I love teaching about proper thesis writing. No, I'm not crazy, I just love to teach it because it was something I struggled with in school, even in university, so when it finally clicked in my brain, I felt the need to share my enthusiasm!
What I had the 9s do (after we did some group examples) was have them pick a topic from a list I provided and write their own introductory paragraph. Most of the topics were great starting points for a persuasive paper. There was everything from the benefits of school sports and locker searches, to the more controversial issues like euthanasia and social welfare. Once the students picked a topic, they had to write out their introduction paragraph (with a hook, general and specific information, and a thesis) and stagger their sentences on a scrap piece of paper to cut out. When they were done, they handed their pieces to a partner to see if they could put together their introduction. You see, I told them that they would know their introduction paragraph was effective if people could take their separate sentences and piece them back together in the right order. If someone could do that, then you know your introduction paragraph was a success.
Check out some of the pictures of the students trying to piece together their classmate's introduction paragraphs! I think we got the hang of it!